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    Wednesday, January 16, 2008

    Haiku in honor of L'element

    Traditional (5-7-5)

    You were the greatest
    investment we didn't know
    we needed to make


    We could not believe
    Ikea cab'nets fit so
    well, until we saw.


    Modified

    To the bamboo floor
    you huffed, "eh, bring it on,"
    but your tires rode low.


    Free form

    Your clean lines evoke minimalism,
    but so many people shirk
    from your boxiness.


    You were cheap and easy —
    the only cheap and easy thing
    about this remodel.

    2 comments:

    Anonymous said...

    weird.

    Kersten said...

    If you are my little brother Eric, you can leave now.